Can This Possibly Be a Good Idea?

If you look closely you can see the sketch ...

And now the paint ...

Can this possibly be a good idea?

Now that I know what I know, can I possibly make this work?  All I'm thinking about right now is not blacking out out all the newsprint, whereas before I was thinking about filling it all in.  Also, I'm doubting that that copy bubble is gonna stay like that.

Looks like a deKooning.
Don't be fooled.