Sunday, November 11, 2012

Copy editing ...

For a long time, we were at this ...



And now, finished, here ...



Let me guess.
Okay, go ahead.
You didn't like the distance between the word "too" and "since" so rather than repainting the entire line you changed the comma to elipses.
Wow.
And you didn't like how dense "her" was, so you did paint a new one over that.
Spooky.
You see.  I know you better than I do myself.
 I am yourself.
Oh.
And I bumped up the periods.

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