The Enumerated Thain, Volume 2

Here's how we ended up:



Obviously a disaster.

Here we are after a bunch of white-outing.



You can see the lettering under the second layer of gesso for now. Remain calm--the next coat will render that lovely white sheen again. The thinking here is to re-enter the annotations along the top and down the left side, more as running copy than as specific items. This then sets up the Mastercard joke in the bottom right, which, other than the two typographic corrections that are underway, will remain the same.

Once finished, I think I'm going to send this to Chicago for a charity auction benefiting the Liam Hyatt Foundation.