Saturday, September 27, 2014

Haiku

It's a green so dark it's almost black,
But I can see it very well.
There's a boat on the reef with a broken back,
And I can see it very well.

That's not even close to being Haiku.
No?
No.
A couple of post back I wrote, describing a Jaguar, "It's a green so dark it's almost black."  I liked the line so much I thought it would make a nice poem.
Well it might.  But it's not Haiku.
You capitalize that?
Don't change the subject.

1 Comments:

Blogger John Harbour said...

Haikus are easy,
But sometimes they don't make sense.
Refrigerator.

5:46 PM  

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